opener:Aragorn
closer:Tech
structure:Tie
punches:aragorn
vocab:Tech
wordplay:Aragorn
overall:aragorn



best punches, this what won the battle......
aragorn
Check... Technician I'll edit your text the way the tech hit 'em...
"S's" don't sound correct with pieces of your neck missin...

I'll put your head in a Vice like Vercetti up in my City....
You think you "nice"... but you don't hit heavy.. battin paws like a kitty...

Your avvy's a mirror image... your suicidal at times..
Cause you can't rival my lines... here's your life on the line *hangs up*


technition
Aragorn, male fans run to his Faucet like Farah Porn
Mad and mourned, a crossbread failure like Carrot-Corn

Can't go a second wit out Flinchin', need help from henchman
My text weapons like Lynchin', bleed Aragorn's clothes crimson

Technician, exhibits repetition, in-hibits ya style ta make a better edition
Like'a half clever collision, my fists crush your light feather submission

tech- if you would of hit harder at your beggining you would of won this battle.
nice read, great batttle pees.

can ya drop a fair vote on the battle in my sig

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