I Am The Light
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Both very nice pieces indeed....Feeble i had a interesting feeling while reading your piece...i cant even explain it...The structure was there the words were there......The realist i loved the way you went about the piece and WOW how this could happen to any of us men out there....
Vote= The realist
I think you had more originality, i saw more of an edge to your piece...possibly sweeter to my eyes and easier to embrass....
very nice on both reads..
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