the breakdown....

deacon...
You really went head first into the topic and the content showed... but... your flow was off a few time... 1 or 2 syllabuls over is ok but some lines went 3 or more over

starts to flood the river beds of my finger prints
Im sinking in pass the depths of skin her inner beauty is a testament

the approach was good, i personally like topic flips more but this one didnt allow it...good piece

Twizz...
Abstract! Your rhyme scheme was very consistent so it had a nice flow...i think you should have done more than an

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because later on that pattern did fall off... the content was good, but imagry was what did it for me here

vote - deacon...consistency

p.s. Stix, try and flip the topic next time... or choose a topic that can be apporached anyway...this one was pretty straight forward