yea ok.... bout damn time!

MethodZ...my man my man....
your verse definetly had some nice imagry, that goes without saying. The rhyme scheme and flow were both consistent...the syllabul count did fall off about 2 times that i saw

Nights of crying & my family just stared and laughed…it never helped.

^biggest example

Hook...
nice and simple, right to the point...good

EZ...
You took my advice, good job. The read is much better with the commas to space out your words... imagry was decent here, content did it for me here...

overall...
you both did good jobs, id just suggest on your next collab, or just next topic, find a way to flip the topic...see how well you guys are when you need to think from a point of view that isnt expected

ohh...and i wouldnt kill myslef for what happend to those kids...unless i was Shemy