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Old 12-09-03, 01:43 PM   #5
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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i didnt really mind the topic
you had some nice wordplay, immagery, and vocab

but you do need to elevate a lil bit, at times in the piece i got lost.

but you do have a lotta potential.

aiight

peace
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