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Old 12-09-03, 02:19 PM   #2
Spekta
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This was a WEAK battle. Both of you need to REALLY work on a LOT.

2WAY- had no punches, and structure was off. Also, you really need to get some wordplay and snaps that make a mu' fucka say, "DAMN!" -You had none.

Read up on some of the elite battlez ~n~ get some ideas, but just don't bite shit.

Will, -wtf? You REALLY need to refine your punches, and bring some wordplay into it, maybe a few multi's.

Out of these two, I gotta say that Will's was the LESS wack of the two, and at the risk of using a "somewhat-starting-to-be-played" term, y'all both need to ELEVATE -A LOT.

Good Luck wit' it.