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Old 12-09-03, 04:54 PM   #15
MC Free
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feelin the same as bouncedoggydog to be honest....save me typing....

'Pheoniix your lines seemed forced. You had some personnels and multis but I was not feeling this drop. I thought you had this won, until I read Meters drop. Keep elevating and add a level of complexity to your verses. No need for explanation, we do understand meta's here...

Meter although your lines were strechted a bit, (I do the same thing) you came hard. Multi's, meta's and word play all pressent. The complexity of your verse by far stood out in my mind. This is what I contribute to your win in my mind. Keep elevating and work on tighting up those lines. Great job.'

my vote = meter

hit this up for me, only need 1 more for the 5-0...wana close it now!

thanks

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