yo homie that was sum hot shit u had evrything good except for de hook but u can work on that

multi's-good
vocab-tight
structure-easy read, so it was excellent
flow-fell down a lil but it was still on fire

overall- keep it comin homie, dat was sum hot shit, nice emotions piece

please return the favor
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