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Old 12-09-03, 07:07 PM   #8
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This was a decent battle...

but Bash your format and rhyme scheme is choppy, some good punches, but without the flow the effect is less... You seem a little pre-occupied with filler and multi's more than making sense and thorwing punches... but you got skillz, just elevate, no beef


B.I. - nice verse

"I'm not one to Bitch..but Definition Of Illness?R you Demented?..
..coz ya Names Dissed in Rb Forever..call it Herbness Cemented!!"
^^ nice

Vote:

Opener: niether really
Punches: B.I.
Multi's: Bash
Originality: B.I.
Best Punch: B.I.
Closer: B.I.

Overall: B.I.

Good battle yall
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