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Old 12-09-03, 07:18 PM   #7
Kautious
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good battle

the problems with these verses

VS: your lines where to strecthed and i wasn't feeling the complexity and vocab of it, and your rhyme scheme was off.

Kali: your lines seemed a lil played seeing how i read anotheer battle about bitch slaps in front lines but you had some good punches through out your verse

i think kali took this battle because of his punches compined with flow and structure

over all good battle
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