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Old 12-09-03, 08:22 PM   #1
varentao
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One for Poetry - Twizzle Stix - Burn a Candle, just for flame

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5249#post975249

This guys been writing excellent stuff for a while now. Has the sort of pen that'll most probably get him published at a very high level.

This piece is beautifully yet subtely crafted. It may seem a bit 'lovey dovey'. But it's more than that. It goes about it's 'aim' in a very broad and in depth way. Yet has a kind of subtelty to it.

It takes some getting into maybe. But that's part of what the piece is.
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