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Old 12-09-03, 08:43 PM   #2
Jecht
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This was a cool piece i enjoyed the read had nice flow to it and it was kinda sad so the emotion was there keep it coming mang 1..

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only 7 years a child
sparkin up ports, black & milds
departed hearts lack da mind 2
understand violence
why is momma cryin tears streamin outa a black eye
an i understand if u fee suicidal at times
momma it'll b alright
ur loving sun is always at ur side

this one goes out 2 my mother, Donna
my family back in da projects, locklear Court
all da project children trippen immortal on Pine ST.
an all across da nation
peace


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