The Golden Chyld
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Damn ... This was a nice topical battle ... But deacon juss murdered this topic completely ... A very ill take on it ... Nice way to bring the topic a different way ...
White had a nice verse also ... But he juss lacked in some aspects of his writin' ... Multi's weren't really present ... And choppy flow made this piece hard to read ... Not a bad verse tho ...
Everyone Seems To Have Infinite Solutions
None Seem To Secure Peaceful Evolution
I thought those were ur best two lines in ur piece ...
Deacon juss opened up completely on this topic ... Multi's were mixed in here and there that added to the interest ... Imagery was sicc ... And a lot of quotables ...
Words are used, broken, twisted and misquoted/
The gossip was probably true the first time somebody told it/
I'm reminded of the wonder of this world in which we live/
How we kill ourselves to have but find freedom when we give/
I thought those lines were the best outta ur verse along wit the endin ... Nice battle from both ... Props
Vote : deacon
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