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Old 12-09-03, 08:55 PM   #7
DaNkSta
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yo, what this cat barz think that he doin//
he get his shit ruined, betta yet, get his whole shit blew in//
foo, how you think you finna get some respect//
this whole ma fuckin web site wasen't ready yet//
this shit is petty (yep)//

Multis-none....filler...1/5

nigga, how you get 2 and 0//
stop suckin dick where you flow//
blaqout nigga, there you go, nigga//
this ma fucka barz must be too fuckin crazy//
this nigga blak woods tuck you in wit this baby//

Once again..filler...better personals 2-5

blatenly spit shit shady//
din't know i go fa ya head to keep shit hazy//
think twice, fa ya call me out ma friend//
beat ya prissy punk pussy ass down again//

Ehhhhh....1/5

Barz

Kid's a dyck-biter, using Writers block for-defence//
Can's more-intense, put the medal-to-woods like the Golf tournaments!// (tiger woods!)
you couldn't win "hacking the polls", so Blaq stays dumb-in-defenseless!//
blaq on this side-of-the-moon, cool..im "sonning"-ur-existence!//

Multis were sorta off.....i liked that tiger woods shit....and the sonning 2 1/2 /5

For instance, your verse was terrible, ..your not tighter!//
Fuck it..you just can't "handle bars" like armless bike riders!//
Your punches are 2 hard? doubt it..
I'm take "blak" out, so they'll see why Newyork havin' another power-outage!//

Hah....Nice handle bars line....multis still sorta off...but better then the first part 3/5

the little experience, explains wackness in your raps-hood!//
made a campfire around his verse, 2 bad, Can laks wood!!!!!//

Nice way to finish....4/5

over all-9/15...not ur best stuff

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