Nice Nice piece...Like Cam had said, your flow fell off in a few places, the verse seemed to lose alot of interest. You had a unique topic toward Christmas, and what it is about, but if you used different vocabulary and some different wording to maybe improve on the imagery, this would've been a great piece. To me, that is what held it back, all your basics were there, but you seemed to lose my interest and you seemed to lose focus of the topic. Remember that you can't lose the big picture of the topic, by throwing in a few words to rhyme, because then that takes off the piece. Good Drop.

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