Wow

ok..

Work on your structure.. try to write your pieces more organized.. like this, maybe..

I'm dope like soap on a slope/
Can't cope with my coke on a pope.
^something along those lines..

Get more complex in your writing and thinking. Read a lot of newspapers, magazines, books, etc., and it will up your vocabulary, imagery, and make your content that much better.

Just keep writing and elevating.