i didnt catch the flow in this at all.

vocab was nice, topic was ehh .. done alot before.

the flow really threw me off though ..

i dont know why cats are mentioning multi's .. i seen 1 or 2 i think ..

the best part of this entire piece were the opening two lines .. nice scheme you used ...

just try to elevate on a few things, keep writing man

stay up
pz..1