Thread: Political Angst
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Old 12-10-03, 03:39 PM   #3
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But this was alright here...structure could a bit of work though i think, your lines are kinda stretched out a bit, but it still flowed alright, but it still fell off at some points though....vocab in this was pretty good....had some good multies in here....overall a alright piece here...keep at it.
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