concept is ooooooooooooooold .. if youre going to do something like this then try to add a unique twist into it that noone expects ..

i hate the big word rhymes .. they dont count as multi's in my book but i guess RB looks at them different ..

split your shit up into bars .. your flow was all over the place in some parts and then in some other parts it was very fluent .. impressed when it was ..

keep writing, just try to touch up here and there and you'll be doin good ..

elevate

pz..1
-salvation