Aiight......

Canucc:nice verse pretty good for a newb!.....keep dat shyt up kid!!......nice job!

Try to keep up, and peep this definition//
I'ma pull this weak geek up, who needs his recignition//

^ nice wordplay n punch!!

I flip your verse, I prewrite only when I'm tired//
leave ya Limp like Durst, cuz tonite I'm wired//

^ dat was aiight!!

Ok Now........

D.I:nice verse shyt was hot!!...nice flow,punch's were good!.......keep dat shyt up!!....

Any signs of past wins should be evaporated,
…put ur head on the chop block and watch u be decapotated/1
Put chains on ya hands and feet and make u my new slave
…..burry u 20 feet deep and then piss on ya grave/2
My flows come wit forces more powerful than floods
…slice ur neck ear to ear and watch u drown in your blood/3
Im comin out wit my gat and in u I will empty my clip
…swell this kids whole face up bigger than jay-z's lip/4
The battle is officially over with the win i just gained
…leave this kid dumbfounded wit his record blood stained/5

^ overall good verse!!

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