I have to say that this pz was very well written 2 problems its been done before and not only that but also she wrote it in paragraph form or that's just how you wrote it so the structure was off not completly wack but it wasn't right either.

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish