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Aiight.........
Tek:Shyt was hott flow was nice,punch's were nice,structure was aiight,overall nice verse!...keep it up!
Cut ya bars wit hollow tips and solid clips that cumbust and scar,
i handle 'iron 9's' you just 'stroke' beef cause you aint "up to par"
i stand like statues wit teks, just to 'pose a threat'
rip out your lungs 'wit your own hands'...but winnin?
..dont "hold your breath"
Listen.....bitch i'll smack you till ya "head-rages"
only time explicit produces "numbers" is on the bottom of "web-pages"
^ sum nice shyt!!
Ok Now....
I.E:shyt wasnt bad,nice flow wit it,it was enjoyable,but tek made me laugh more!!....but keep it up!!....nice try.
I'll straight put ya rhyme ta shame.... teks verse neva got off the ground like an iraqi fighter plane\
ya rhyme’s are plain droppin wak quit talkin back .....or else i’ma cream this pussy like monistat\
just stop the act ‘fore I stomp this cat...tek’s like jenny craig rejects you just ain’t droppin fat\
ya not jus wak tek fa real ya bland...and rubbin between ya toes is the only way ta feel ya jam\
ya quick ta ‘dodge’ wit no skill ta ‘ram’ in the end like sex changes gone wrong I’m still the man\
kill ya plan cause all that ya spit is filler....shit I could even feed off your verse then shit it iller\
^ sum nice punch's!!
Vote:tek
reason:he gets my vote by a little!!
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