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Old 12-10-03, 06:21 PM   #2
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This was alright i thought....your structure was ok, the lines were kinda stretched out but you had the internals and multies to make it work for you though....flow was alright in this, could be a bit better i thought...chorus was alright i thought...overall alright piece...keep at it.
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