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Old 12-10-03, 07:18 PM   #2
Accelerate
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One word....
ELEVATE
you need to work on everything....INCLUDING creative lyrics...Please don't take this the wrong way, but you are not anticipated in your return. Your rhymes are played out, and your structure sucks, along with the flow. Take this as constructive criticism and work on your weaknesses.
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