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Old 12-10-03, 07:33 PM   #4
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you definately had delivery, thats a good thing, but u need a few more things to make the song worth while to anyone who gives more of a shit. so like skiddz said, elevate, work out your structure for sure, read the dictionary or something, just work on it, and keep the delivery, delivery was good...
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