this was long as fuck but you made it well worth the time. I wass really feelin some of the ocncepts seen throughout this piece it was kinda bouncy as far as staying on one thought train but the randomness made it more catching to the eye to read it. The flow was way hot mice internals everywhere and killer multis in the right places. the rhyme scheme was a bit scetchy in spots but overall the syllable counts matched up this was a nice piece I definately felt it-1