what i didn't like:

the vocab sometimes fucked with the flow or the vocab really hurt the steadiness of your rhymes. Big words sound alot better if your rhyming them multi syllabically. basically in my opinion if you wwrote your shit more in multi's it would hurt your vocab a bit but would make you pretty untouchable with how deep your content is. You had a few multis toward the end that i noticed that were pretty nice though. not much else negative i can say on this like i said before i was feelin it.


now if youd return the favor and check out my replyless post it would be appreciated