MMK for a second I was confused because I thought literally it was about the title... which I might add made me chose it from all these on the front page, I looked all of them over for a minute. I found it ironic that you were speaking about the English language and then chose to use slang words but I guess in all that's part of expressing what the English language is unable to do at all times... I smell ya... kinda like a "words can't express..." insert whatever feeling it is that's there and overwhelming at the moment... I dunno I like it. It was creative and different... saw it as many things, one a comming out peice as well. Pretty good, I can't really pick anything on it that was bad... on the other side there are things that did catch my attention and make me say wow!

"time rip and our minds slips accidentally speaking theories of life
on a genious surface
on an invisible grip
might as well have a speech impediment
because what I said in heaven is worthless"

Those lines right there stood out to me and I liked them... nice peice...