I liked your content... you had some nice wordplay,
your rhyme scheme was really nice... and I liked the
format of this peice in whole... it was a very nice read,...
you rarely get those any more....

Rule,
Im rebuilding the OMENS... I need ill heads in there that
are active... you were one of the only ill cats that was active,...
and if you want to get back wit the OMENS... there is a
co-leader spot waitin for ya...
Im still recruiting members... its takin awhile cuz I only want
ill heads in the Omens.... the crew went to shit after we let
so many newbies in... so I dont want to make that mistake again,
hit me up in the tryout thread and just state whether your in or out dawg...
~AshY~