i love this..and i like the phrase you added to tupac's..as well as the same quote from posted above..great imagery, i could see and feel what i was reading and it had a very powerful message that i can relate to...if only i could display it the way you have..this was great keep it up...

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~