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Old 12-11-03, 05:13 PM   #2
Mr.Christensen
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
 
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you must LOVE cams structure... you use it well

topic approach was nice, decent vocab.... little piece of advice dont "net" rap
i.e. "w/" just to make your lines look same lenght...if they are too far off, reword the line and fix syllabul count

word, peep the sig gangster hoe 2pac for life fiya word dope
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