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Old 12-11-03, 06:10 PM   #12
Theo Ginn
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West...

wheneva i read your shit...i cant help readin it with a scotish accent in my head...lol fucks it up a lil...but was fellin your lines...flows on point..topic and structure is there...nice verses

Dutch...

You had the dopest lines in this collabo...but your structure is a lil fucked...just cud do wit tidyin up a lil to make your verse look nicer..lol...but it aint stretched..didnt throw off the flow...dunno where TR is commin from :|...came with a tight verse..liek i said...good shit...deep yada yada yada...lol open mics aint my thing

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As a brit that's witnessed a war been left with a scar
can't even see anymore nevermind lookin at the stars
imagine writin bars and picturin tha world from afar
people trapped behind them coz wot nationality they are

dope...

I state the fact the fact was stated but myself respect wasnt created
Only minimalized to zero tho i aint a hero im a pawn and i remain insulated

pure dope

props...vote on my battle with amend in elevated frontlines.

bye
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