DAMN what studio did you goto cauz you sound like shit, Cauz if you had a dencent Producer and sound enginer you would not sound like trash, I think you down loaded the beat and recorded this on your computer cauz your voice and the beat dont mix in the least the sound like they are hella over dub'd with no mixing or mastering or anything. and for your voice there is a thing called EQ's cauz you need to bring down that High pitch crack, and for thous cracks you should use tone correcting softwere and any decent studio should have that. I know If I recorded you you wouldnt sound that shitty. damn so my advice is keep practing and try to rap wit a lower tone, and find a real producer somone who does not suck ass... Peace

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