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Old 12-11-03, 07:36 PM   #19
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rapture, took this one with decent punches (i like the line about fat chicks in gymnastics), better wordplay, metas, multi, everything...........street, you gotta come with less predictable verses....i tell this to a lot of people, you shouldn't be able to guess the words your gonna use to rhyme before i finish reading it.....keep elevatin man, you'll get it...but for now my vote goes to rapture..................one...........
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