aight hound your wordplay was okay but your punches and personals were too basic........lewd kept it consistent with his personals and stayed on the attack throughout his whole verse...hound you kinda kept it strong in some areas but let it weaken in others....just work on ya consistency and that will help you a lot................overall lewd gets my vote...........

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