Check it...

~Pick It Up~

This so called "soldier" is about to be detached from the army...
Like a clan of stuffed animals, its a a fact they can't harm-me...
Set flame to ya name, soon you'll be nuthin but fire...
"Tek you're gonna win this," it's too bad I'm a liar...
Take your clan and retire, you'd make way better poets...
An abstract stack of lines, its a shame you don't know it...

~Close It~

You're lines are in excess, you've been provin useless...
Only a hazard to yourself, the only way you're abusive...
Its exlusive, you're known to expose blows without impact...
I could be posed frozen closin on you and ya still not intact..
Overflow your whole soul to demote ur own goal as an entirety...
Congrats man, you've made my list of victims I didn't try-to-beat...


blah...g'luck

peace