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Old 12-11-03, 11:42 PM   #4
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From: E-Dub
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ha...good battle....dw had some good punches and nice metas....but feeble came back with harder punches....and some funny personals....here's what got it...

Quote:
Feeble Minded:
time to get skills. . well, im waiting, u swell with hatred
& talking about being elite?. . u dont even belong in elevated
text wise your still a newb, every battle u fumble through
. . shows your screenname is the only way u'll get D W
^^haha...funny...DW line was good...

BREAKDOWN
Multis - dw (he had a few)
Vocab - dw
RhymeScheme - Feeble
Structure - Feeble
Flow - Tie
Metas - dw
Wordplay - dw
Punches - Feeble
Personals - Feeble (would be a tie...but Feeble's hit harder)
Creativity - Feeble
Complexity - Tie (dw line from feeble kept this a tie)
Overall - Feeble got this with just harder and more creative punches.....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote.....

peace
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