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Old 12-12-03, 12:13 AM   #20
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damn....i agree with Rappad...i expected to see better from u both....Relik had some old concepts/punches in his lines (Kweli & Rodney lines) and Tonya's opener made no sense at all to me..lol....but....she did have it in overall harder punches and better wordplay....

BREAKDOWN
Vocab - Relik
Multis - Neither
Metas - Tonya
Wordplay - Tonya
Punches - Tonya
Personals - Tie (Neither really had good hard hitting ones)
RhymeScheme - Tie
Structure - Relik
Flow - Relik
Creativity - Tonya
Complexity - Tonya
Overall - like i said in the beginning...Tonya gets this with just better metas and some decent punches here and there....good read from u both though..no hate...just a vote..

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