Solja I think you got potential but you should work on your choice of words to play with and structure..I'm new, from what I have seen, the voters want to see people get defamed..with no remorse, keep that in mind next time you spit. Keep postin'.

Meters got the W...due to word play and structure. One negative, I don't dig explaining your verse. The rules say 10- 14 lines and thats it. If the concept is to hard to figure out I don't think you should spit it...Good battle...peace....