Thread: One Mistake
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Old 12-12-03, 05:00 AM   #16
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this was a pretty Good Read...Your Flow was Consistant which was nice....ya Structure Could use some work But it still worked.....Ya Vocab was over Average.......all and all a Good Read Man Keep It Dropin AIight Peace......
Could ya Leace some Feedback on My Open Mic
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