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Old 12-12-03, 07:31 AM   #19
Spekta
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JK's Verse:

i dont understand this cat? B creative. Ill murk this fake fool//
call me 'Ja' cuz i got 'rule' behind me.....nigguh i break rules//
^Nice opener -lil' filler to start, but a hard punch.

this guys 'wiggalicious'...gets on the web and sits back//
ill write 'negro' on his toungue and he still couldnt 'spit black'//
^Another good punch, still SOME filler to start tha line tho.

u accepted tha call........so now you'll lose by my scripture//
i gotta beat u wit 'kodak film'.......so u can 'get tha picture'//
^lil' played, but decent snap.

call urself rule with a pic of J-Z.....u controdict ur favorites//
well u diddnt put the Ja.......so u diddnt completely fake it//
^LMAO ---Hard hit.

call urself 'rule' but no one 'follows' ur words that uve spoken//
and u jus got involved wit JK...so lets just say this 'rules' 'broken'//
^Tough ass close. Best line in tha battle.

Rule's Verse:

Kids callin a battle obviously an understatement to vets
Couldn't beat a herb so I understand raps full of regrets
^good opener.

Your career as a lyricest couldn't obligue to nothing more
Your losing every battle like the jews for hitlers damn war
^OK line, but not a refined snap -could be better.

Justin Kredible is rediculous...incredible defines: Unbelievable
Similer to a pussy in your mouth to you a cock is more edable
^hahaha, nice w/play, punch

Circumstances i'm going to go easy an hardly swing the bar
Turn my back 180 degrees let you swing you'd still be under par
^ehh, mostly filler.

Even if i was blinded and walking towards your rath uncautiously
You couldn't attempt a balanced hit thus your not hittin properly
^ more filler, and not a hard close.

Tha Breakdown:

Open: JK
Close: JK
Wordplay: Rule
Meta's: JK
Multis: JK (3)
Vocab: JK
Flow: Rule
Punches: JK

Vote: JK

Good battle, JK jus' came wit' harder punches/snaps.