theres always times where everyone wishes they could go back in time and change things that happened or say something they didnt. You had good ideas of how you wanted to show this, i just think you could have put them into better words. We all got your message and feelings real clear thou. your basics could be worked on some too. but the main part was the feeling of the piece, and that was pretty good, keep posting!

~Tera~
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