All this hatin'..This man's tryin' to get better..All you people with negative comments without critique \( A vast majority)..Should recheck your egos..Because half of you probably couldn't do half as good...Anyways.

For the piece....I agree, format was off..It went t the beat kind of..Just not near as skillfull...IMO..But keep trying...This is a good start..Remix's are a good way to test your talent..Gives you a topic someone else has already covered, also a chance to review what they wrote for an example..Much easier than a free-based idea but good for rap consoul...Keep tryin', i'll be lookin''...

6/10

1ne