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Old 12-12-03, 04:39 PM   #8
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Love Is A Fading Thing...An Angel Can Only Do So Much
Love Count Is Always Dropping..Without An Arrow's Touch

Tight

But I'll stay Im not leavin', There's so many things I haven't seen
It's juss, Forever seems too long to wait for feathered wings
I could never bring, A crows when my tears stick around
And Im cryin' so often now, It feels like my heads in a cloud

Illness...Especially the last line and the second one..I see Aesop isquoted in mentill's sig..The seconsd and the third guy gave me kind of an aesop feeling..Tight shit..The first guy kind of slacked back from the others but none the less made a god effort to keep up and had some tight lines..My fav. verse was mentills..You killed it on the last four lines..Beautiful ending..Shame this only has 6 replies..Very good drop..


All i ever wanted was to pick apart the days, put the pieces back togtether my way -Aesop...Word...

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