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Old 12-12-03, 10:24 PM   #9
Yu Bin SunD
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good battle appyled took this fora newb ya both got potential just need to work on ya structure and sentence shortening but other than that vocab is there but opti. he needs to work on his metas and personals cause that's how you win battles both lacked some tin but overall flow applyed took it

if ya got over100+ posts vote on that battles on sig
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