Thread: Hear 2 Stay II
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Old 12-12-03, 11:41 PM   #5
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wasn't really Enjoyen this But it was ok.....Need to Work on ya structure and ya Vocab...ya Flow was alright....It was too short i think it coulder been 2 verse Or 20 Lines That Would Been Betta....MULTIS U NEED MULTIS they Make the Piece So Much Betta Ok.....All and all a good Drop Keep at it Kuz....(v)....
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