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Old 12-13-03, 09:09 AM   #22
RythmicTendicies
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Damn dawg, shits blazin...i love this new style of yours, you've decreased your bar length and it's came out tops..the flow has improved beacause of that...you had dope rhyme scheme and mad internals, vocab was immaculate as usual...loved the imagry you portrayed here....damn!

Edicius
your style has also been adjusted (i think)... you have alot more internals and you manipulated words..screwed them about which was off-the-chain. Real gritty emotion here (from both parties), you too portrayed a ill fearful image...the wordplay you used was a nice addition too...tight.

4/5..nuttin bad to say about it..keep this shit up, shit was blazin.
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