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this was a good verse, so was the first one though, i liked the vocab in this it was really good, your descriptions on things i think were very well done, the lenght also was good, i think this is going tobe a good song once it is done... you going to put it in adio? it would probably sound good there but thats my 2 cents
great verses keep it up
peace
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