Thread: We see you ft.80SHOTS
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Old 12-13-03, 10:08 AM   #5
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this was alright i didnt really like the concept you need too up the vocab, your structure was good but i felt it seemed rushed to be put together, but al in all you both stayed in key with eachother which was cool keep it up
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