Allegory's Verse

ForOne son, ur bars are sensless & the shittiest.
..this kids lost..
..he's depriving some poor village of it's idiot.

^Funny, but I've heard it before

u suck dun, & to think u battled me next.
..u beatin me?..
stop shittin urself & go cash ur reality check.

^Okay.

u should've got the abort bee, & u'll torch me?
i got a gun..
u got a dumb..
he supported his right to bare arms & wore short sleeves!

^The whole..got a gun/got a dumb thing could have been left out. The punch was decent though.

i pass gas & to think im bound with this fart.
fuck youth, GET THIS KID A FOUNTAIN OF SMART.

^Lol, don't know...found that funny

u might as well walk, dont run for the bus man.
cause..
the closest route for u to dope is under construction.

^lmao

yea ur here, ur quite far..
but she didnt give birth to the right parts.
shit ur only here cause..
..when u were born, ur gene pool didnt have lifegaurds.

^1st line sucked, second was dope, lol.

damn ur wack son, i could have just battled my self.
& ur not Bribeone1, ur the negative five thousand & twelve.

SHitty Closer

Bribe's Verse

I'm giving u hell and keepin u there similar to eternal purgatory
allegory been passed around more than a sexual fraternal story

^1st line bleh, 2nd was comedy.

bury your glory in front of your kids w/ a quick death to an affair
gamble on your life and I would guarantee a bet that u dont care

Eh, okay.

your a crook to the art as it was reported you tried breaking in
this is the first leg of the tourney and I've resorted to breaking it

^Nice

heres a tip, u cant carry this weight so u need aid in barbells
I could of sworn it was a bye week since im waving farewells

Blah closer.

This is a tough choice. Bribe could have taken it easily had he put a couple more hard hitting lines in there. That weak closer hurt you a lot too. Allegory actually had some pretty witty punches in there. The structure and flow were off though. It did have a flow to it, it was just an odd one. I'm not sure. As far as having MORE hard hitting punches, I'll have to go with Allegory. Close battle...but this time.....some quality with a lot of quantity beats out good quality with no quantity.

Vote ~ Allegory.